Monthly Archives: October 2019

Not Doing Nation Novel Writing Month

Tomorrow is kick off for a lot of people who will be attempting to write 50,000 words in 30 days. This is an entirely achievable goal and I salute every person assault that mountain but I myself will not be taking part.

I have my system of writing and I find it works very well for me. I writer Monday thru Friday and take the weekends off. This keeps me engaged and I avoid burn out.

I will however be starting on a new novel in November. Just yesterday I completed the first draft of my outline for a new SF book. The outline clocked in at 8700 words, not my longest and not my shortest, and I discovered quite a few things about my plot, my characters, and their relationship along the way. I think it is during the outlining phase that I experience the same sort of discovery process that ‘pantsers’ having while writing their first drafts. It is also where the gaps in logic and plot holes first appear to me and I can fix them before doing the pick and shovel work of actually writing the scenes.

Now to draft a synopsis and run that past my potential editor.

 

 

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HBO’s Watchmen

So with my expectations appropriately low I have begun watching HBO new series Watchmen. In this review I will fullyspoil both the comic and 2009 adaptation of Watchmen.

Why am I setting expectation low for this alternate history super hero series? The answer is one name, Damon Lindelof. Lindelof has been a writer if television and feature for a number of years and his name is attached to some major projects, Star Trek: Into Darkness, Prometheus, World War Z, Cowboys and Aliens, and the recently delayer and/or canceled feature film The Hunt. With the exception of that final entry which I have not viewed, all of these projects not only left me cold but I felt assaulted by intelligence with gaps in logic that no suspension bridge of disbelief could span. Given that history as a writer I expect very little from a Damon Lindelof project.

However I am a fan of Watchmen  both the original comic and the Snyder feature adaptation and I heard enough about this set up and premise of this series to genuinely intrigue me.

Watchmen  is in an alternate time line where costumed heroes began appearing in the streets sometime in the 1940s. For both the comic and the 2009 feature this leads to a radically different 1980s, Nixon is never forced out of office by Watergate, a god-like being Doctor Manhattan transforms science, technology, and world events by being a patriotic ‘superman,’ figure, and the US Constitution is amended to allow unlimited terms for a president. One of the more revered heroes, Ozymandias, convinced only he can save the world from impending nuclear annihilation fakes a catastrophic event to create species wide unity. In the comic he stages an inter-dimensional attack on Earth from giant squids, and in the 2009 feature he frames Dr. Manhattan for the attack. In both cases half of metropolitan New York is killed. The remaining, having failed to stop the attack, commit to keeping the secret giving Ozymandias’ plan a chance of success except for the manically committed Rorschach. In order to maintain their conspiracy Dr. Manhattan murders Rorschach but a by Rorschach journal detailing his investigation into the plot is published and the world continues to teeter on the brink of global nuclear war.

The series Watchmen  take place 30 years later in a parallel 2019 but it is not clear if it has followed the comic’s reality with monstrous being from another dimension having ‘attacked’ the Earth in the 1980s or the 2009’s Dr. Manhattan hoax timeline. Given Manhattan’s known presence on Mars and a rain of tiny squid in episode one I am inclined to believe that Lindelof is extrapolating from the comic’s history.

Episode one opens with a heinous event that tragically is not part of some dark alternate timeline but rather a part shameful American History, The Tulsa Race Massacre, when rioting white slaughter the residents of the Midwest’s ‘Black Wall Street.’  We follow the survival of one young boy as the rioting and murders exterminate the town around him. The story picks up some ninety-odd years later with our lead character Angela Abar. Angela is a police detective but following an earlier terrorists campaign police are masked adopting like super heroes secret identities. The terrorists that waged their war on the police were the Kavalry, a virulent racist organization that idolizes the murdered Rorschach. When the Kavalry resurfaces Angela’s world is turned upside down and she quickly becomes entwined in a new conspiracy with roots stretching back to the 1921 massacre. Simultaneously on a distant English estate Ozymandias lives in retired seclusion pursuing his own unrevealed plots that involve genetic engineering and artificial people.

There is a very strong moral ambiguity to the show. The Kavalry are presented in a no redeeming method but the police, our protagonists employee torture to achieve their means and that is never good.

Watchmen  the series in its first two episodes presents a number of interesting and compelling character but also displays a few typical Hollywoodisms that usually mar action sequences with events that simply defy any understanding of how the physics of the world actually work but so far nothing that has dissuaded me from watching further episodes.  All in all Lindelof’s show is interesting, complex and may still prove that more than The Fonz can jump a shark.

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The Impeachment Express is Gaining Speed

To me it now looks as though impeachment is a foregone conclusion. That is not to say that Trump’s removal from office is assured. If I were to place bets today I would wager that the House passes their articles of impeachment and that the Senate would acquit. With Trump commanding 85% to 90% support within the Republican Party I doubt that there are very many GOP officials willing to publicly cross their party’s popular leader. While I believe that evidence is high and continue to grow that Trump has abused the office of the Presidency for personal political ends I do not think that GOP member are willing to risk getting a mini-trump primary opponent and will take their chances in the general election. At this time and with the current electorate that is the safe political decision, it only sacrifices honor, ethics, and rule of law.

There are many Republicans that feel that Trump is an aberration, a violation of their party’s political norms, a bolt of lightening that makes a loud noise but lives only a brief life and is soon nothing but a memory. This is wrong.

Trump did not spring to head of the party defeating established and hardline conservatives without the battlefield’s terrain well-prepared ahead of his advance. For decades as the GOP pursued power they surrendered again and again their principles. Placing victory as the only goal they advanced lies over truth, they celebrated coarse and degrading slanders of their opponents, and donned an impenetrable cloak of hypocrisy. With decades of such actions it is not surprising that Trump stole their party only that someone like Trump didn’t do it earlier. When Trump is gone, either in defeat in 2020, 2024 (shudder), or by impeachment, the party will not revert to some imagined norm Trump has changed the party without a war to drive his influence from the party it will continue with his imprint.

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Movie Review: The Current War

Completed in 2017 and released only just now due to the break up of the Weinstein Company The Current War  is the story of Thomas Edison and George Westinghouse as they battled to set the standards for electric power and distribution in the United States and the wider world.

Benedict Cumber batch plays Thomas Edison, the proponent of Direct Current (DC) power. DC flows in a single direction and is simple, and at the time was the only current that could be used to drive motors and industrialization Industrialist George Westinghouse, played by Michael Shannon in a role where he not an over bearing villain, supports Alternating Current (AC), where the direction of election flow reverses many times per second. AC power could be produced much cheaper and with clever manipulation transmitted over vastly greater distances that DC which dissipates into nothing after barely more than a mile, but when Westinghouse is advocating for his system there were no motors that could run using the AC standard. Each man is presented favorably with neither placed into the role of ‘villain.’ Benedict’s Edison is a family man, devoted to his wife and children, and a person who refuse to use his genius, name, or vast intellectual resources to create engine of war and destruction; he consider the killing of humans abhorrent. Shannon’s Westinghouse is also a man devoted to his wife, treats her as partner in his enterprise, and also sees himself serving a public good. Edison is supported by his aide and confidant Samuel Insull (Tom Holland) while Westinghouse’s mirror support character is Franklin Pope (Stanley Townsend) the engineer that Westinghouse has charged with inventing an AC motor.

Into the violate conflict of towering intellects and ego arrives a Serbian immigrant, Nikola Tesla (Nicholas Hoult.) Titles identified Edison as an ‘Inventor’ and Westinghouse as an ‘Industrialist’ but Tesla is labeled ‘Futurist,’ a word that would not be applied to technology until the 1920s. Tesla, always more concerned with what is possible than what is personally profitable, a visionary man with unprecedented gifts for engineering and technology claims to have solved the AC motor design.

The war to determine the electric standard is fought city by city, as some adopt Edison’s vision and other Westinghouse’s and the most vicious fighting take place on the front pages of the newspapers as propaganda replaces reason.

The film is generally well made, the scenes are tight, the performances stellar and yet the over all effect is only adequate.  Key moments in the historical record are omitted, such as Tesla surrendering his patents for the AC motor, ensuring that AC becomes the standard but costing himself an uncountable fortune, and set ups in the film are never paid off. The most frustrating of these is centered on the AC motor. Pope has a sewing machine connected to his AC motor and the needles does not move, Westinghouse implores that Pope must solves the problem and move the needle, but yet when the AC motor is invented there is no scene of the sewing machine in action. This is the sort of visual pay off moment that not only provided the audience with critical and visual understanding of the engineering but also can be used as an emotional beat for the characters. Not having such a moment dramatically undercuts the entire arc of the war.

Despite this The Current War  is worth seeing, it is competent film with an amazing cast.

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Movie Review: The Lighthouse

Robert Eggers, the writer and director of 2015’s Puritan nightmare The Witch,  is back with another historic tale of terror.  The Lighthouse set in the 1890’s, is a film about two men on a desolate and distance rock of an island stationed as lighthouse keepers. Willem Defoe plays Thomas Wake, the senior lighthouse keep, a sea dog retired by injury but for whom the love of the sea has never subsided. Robert Patterson plays Ephraim Winslow, the young and junior man learning the trade and subject to Wake’s order and whim.

Filmed in stark black-and-white, it’s been reported that the film stock had to be manufactured in order for the camera to roll on this production, and with a tight compressed aspect ratio  The Lighthouse  is a confined claustrophobic movie with a stark spare setting contrasted with expansive performances by both Defoe and Patterson the threaten to shatter the frame. The photography is deliberately disorienting as sea, fog, and land blend in endless greys heightening the sense that the rest of the world as vanished over the horizon and that for these men there is nothing but the grueling work, their own clashes of personality, and the ever encroaching madness. The combination of Egger’s passion for historical detail, the bleak black and white cinematography, along with the ever present fog horn create a verisimilitude that absorbs the audience into the film’s reality.

Hallucinatory and with an unreliable narrator The Lighthouse  is not standard mass-market movie making. People who are expecting kills, jump scares, and a spot of violence every ten minutes are sailing for disappointment with this film. Closer in kin to David Lynch or Cronenberg’s Videodrome, The Lighthouse is a tale of madness and isolation that is powered by the stellar performances trapped with its close quarters. Much like Egger’s previous film The Witch  this movie is not easily accessible and is likely to spark a sharp divide between its critical reception and general audience reactions. Though not as symbolic as Lynch, Egger’s film requires active interpretation by the audience with scene after scene that depicts the tenuous grasp of sanity and its loss as the isolation breaks each man in his own manner. Personally I was more thrilled with The Witch on my first viewing but now even eight hours later I find the sounds and images of The Lighthouseto be haunting my thoughts and provoking deeper contemplation. It is a film that cannot be fully assessed with a single viewing and mark’s Eggers as a talent of bold cinema that is willing to color well outside of the lines.

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It! The Terror From Beyond Space

Continuing my run of films best suited for the month of October last night, after a very frustrating day dealing with AT&T technical support, I watched 1958’s It! The Terror From Beyond Space. This movie along with Planet of the Vampires,  in which no vampires appear, is one of the direct predecessors to 1979’s amazing and classic film Alien. Written by Jerome Bixby It! Pits the crew of a spaceship against a deadly and unstoppable monstrous alien that has stowed away aboard their rocket.

The first Mars expedition has ended in disaster with all communication lost after the ship reached Mars. The film opens with a voice over explaining that the second expedition has rescued the narrator, the sole survivor of the doomed first, and is taking him back to Earth to face trial for the murder of he fellow crew in a bid to survive the harsh and unforgiving Martian environment. It’s not long before the alien stow away make itself known and the crew begin their retreat deck by deck from its lethal assaults. This exploration/rescue mission is stocked with cases of grenades, endless 45 semi-automatic pistols, home made gas bombs, and even a bazooka that is fired off in the cramp confines of the bridge but nothing stops or even hampers the creature’s attacks.  Two of the ten cast members are women but even for 1958 this movie is out right sexist with the ladies forced to serve dinner and coffee while providing only the barest of plot of character motivations, and with the younger, of course, thrust into a needless love triangle because that’s why females characters exist in movies.

Despite its cheesiness It! Manages to score what might be a few important moments in cinema history. Between stolen model designs and sequences the climax of the film may very well represent the first cinematic explosive decompression. The basic set up was one of the films that inspired Dan O’Bannon when he started out crafting the script to Alien and that lineage is stark and clear. Without this mostly forgettable film we would have never been introduced to Ellen Ripley.

 

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The Spanish Language Dracula

The twin monster hits Frankenstein  and Dracula  made Universal Studios the home of horror in the 1930 thru the 1950s and stars of Boris Karloff and Bella Lugosi but a lesser know film of that same year that is worth viewing is the Spanish Language version of Universal’s Dracula.

While the principal cast and crew came in during the day and filmed the now classic 1931 Dracula during the evening hours an entirely different crew and cast, using the same set and script, albeit in Spanish, filmed a version for the Spanish language world. This version is often included as bonus content on Blu-rays and better collections featuring the Lugosi Dracula. Considered lost until the 1970’s when a print was discovered and fully restored.

With more daring costuming and a more sensual atmosphere this edition has fans around the world. It is interesting to compare the leads in each film. Lugosi, of course became a star, though of course his terrible drug addiction, first caused for pain treatment for wound he suffered in World War I, severely damaged his career and outside of the Spanish film world Carlos Villarias is virtually unknown. An interesting element to Villarias’ performance is that it strikes dramatically different tones as the characters shifts between charming and vampiric. When he is suave and sophisticated Villarias’ performance strikes me as superior to Lugosi’s, effortless carrying off the easy confidence and command of a person infused with his or her own sense of nobility. However when the blood lust and thirst takes the character Villarias’ performance becomes so overly expressed with his eyes bulging wide and his face contorting into strange expressions that the performance becomes comic and far inferior to Lugosi’s classic composure.

 

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Streaming Review: Revenge

Released in 2017 Revenge  is a French movie about Jen (Matilda Lutz) her rich married boyfriend Richard (Kevin Janssens) and his pair of hunter pals Stan and Dimitri. Jen has flown with Richard to his isolated landed estate in the desert for a weekend affair but their assignation is interrupted by the early arrival of Stan and Dimitri who are to accompany Richard on a hunting trip. After an evening of music, dancing, and drink, Richard departs for business and while left alone Jen is raped by Stan and Dimitri does nothing to stop the assault. Richard attempts to buy Jen’s silence with a check but things spiral out of control until it becomes a fight for survival and revenge with Jen pitted against the three men.

Over all I found Revenge  to have not lived up to its hype. I remember hearing about from corners of my film community and it even played at a local micro-theater but I never got the chance to see it until watching it in Shudder. Despite being directed by a woman, Coralie Fargeat, the staging, costuming, and framing of Matilda Lutz struck me as overly objectifying. I never fully engaged empathically with Jen, her terrible plight, or her struggle and I think that comes down to two major factors. The first is the leering nature of the photography it seemed to constantly present Jen only something of a sexual desire keeping me at a distance from her as a character. The second major reason for my emotional disconnection is my shattering of disbelief when presented with unreal and impossible physical damage that characters not only survive and but remain fighting functional. It would appear that the scriptwriter has never been exposed to the concept of internal bleeding or exactly why you can’t run with your major abdominal muscles torn or ruptured.

My viewing coming quickly after another recent film on Shudder  about a young woman who has to survive after a terrible assault I could not help but compare this with The Corpse of Anna Fritz. Anna Fritz  while produced on a much smaller budget and with far fewer sequences of action, was a film where I never lost a tense and fearful emotional connection with the character of Anna. Watching Revenge  I was mostly bored but during Anna Fritz I was engaged and concerned, desperately hoping for Ann to escape this unjust and unfair situation. There is far more nudity in Anna Fritz  and yet it is presented in a manner that did not feel leering or objectifying but rather exposed and terrifying.

I cannot recommend Revenge and if you have Shudder  go with Anna Fritz  instead.

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I Have A Release Date

My debut novel, Vulcan’s Forge now has it official release date from Flame Tree Press, March 26th 2020. (That year, 2020 still feels to me like some distant far away future.) The novel will be available in Hardback, Paperback, and e-Book editions. There will also be an audio book but I am not sure of its release date.

Because there is a release date that means the novel is now available for pre-order. I have already confirmed that at both major on-line retailers, that is to say Amazon, and at my local specialty bookstore Mysterious Galaxy, so if you are interested you can buy the book now for it’s March release. (I am informed that pre-orders count more for success than off the shelf purchases.)

 

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Movie Review: Zombieland : Double Tap

Man, I loved Zombieland  and the best thing I can say about Double Tap  is that I’m happy to see the original cast back but the bets bits are all in the trailer.

The original film was a charming, funny, and ultimately touching movie about the power of found family. The sequel is a collection of gags strung together with barest of plots and utterly devoid and any real story.

It’s been ten years since the Zombie Apocalypse and our heroes have taken up a stable residence but haven’t changed or grown much as characters, When Little Rock, in the original film the characters avoid the painful memories of their previous lives referred to themselves by significant destination and not their names, who has now become a young woman and is feeling the isolation of no romantic companion ship and her sister Wichita, feeling strangely stifled in her relationship with Columbus, suddenly leave, Columbus and Tallahassee are forced out of their routine and embark on an odyssey. They face many new dangers and meet many new characters before the entire family emotionally returns back to where they had started.

Characters in good fiction have needs and wants, and note that those are usually not the same thing, a character may want something but need something that is the opposite to complete their emotional arc. The characters of Double Tap  have wants but few needs of any kind and what they do want is the most plot driven of objectives. While the film is populated with talented actors who can turn a fine comedic performance the lack of an emotional story that is compelling ultimately make the movie hollow and empty. There are gags, and many of them are on display in the trailer, but there is no theme. The film is in the end not about anything at all. The script feels like one that has had many comedic hands working the sequences and the jokes are decent, but without a compelling story none of it really matters. If during the running of your film I am thinking to myself just how lovely Emma Stone’s eye are then you have lost me because I simply do not care what happens on the scree.

I cannot recommend Double Tap  and your time would be better spent putting in the Blu-ray and watch Zombieland  again.

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