Category Archives: SF

Treacherous Seas

In less than a month my debut novel Vulcan’s Forge will be released upon an unsuspecting world. My editor at Flame Tree has expressed the hopes in the future that we shall be working together on many novels. I have found everyone at Flame Tree to be wonderful, supportive, and utterly professional and welcoming so the idea of working with them on more books is very enticing.

Some years ago, I completed a military SF novel that landed me with a literary agency. While the association with the agency didn’t work out and we went our separate ways, that novel has sparked at least some interest with a couple of publishing houses.

The trouble is timing.

Two other editors are looking at the book, one because we met a conference and they read a few sample pages and the other because I had submitted the manuscript through the imprint’s slush pile. (Slush pile is the name for the great stack of manuscript that are sent to a publisher un-agented.) Both publishers have had the book for over a year now. In that interim I sold, edited, and next both will have published Vulcan’s Forge with Flame tree.

I have decided that I am going to go ahead and send my military SF book over to Flame Tree. I will let the other editors know what the score is but I can’t even be sure that my emails are being read. These are turbulent seas to navigate and the sort where having an agent would be extremely helpful but I have no agent and must sail these waters myself.

I am taking some time to revise the manuscript before sending it over the Flame Tree. When I submitted to that agency I was signed with it was 115,000 words long, not overly long for an SF novel, but the reader and co—owner of the agency had required that I cut it down before he recommended it to his agents and so I brought it down to 98,000 words. I did this by trimming the opening battle but I was never truly happy with that. The massive battle that opens the book is meant to have the scale, weight, and importance of something along the lines of WWII’s battle of Midway and the lighter version I felt didn’t quite get that across. So, I am going back to the 115,000 words manuscript, making minor adjustments and that will by the new version.

Wish me luck.

 

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Brief Comments on the Passing of Mike Resnick

Mike Resnick noted science fiction author and mentor to many up and coming writers has died. He did not disclose publicly that severity of his condition and there are a great many in the field that will miss him.

I never had the fortune to have personal interaction with Mike other than a few passing online comments and an ‘almost there’ rejection letter. (He said he was onboard for the story until the last two pages.)

Many of my writing friends have had close communication and guidance from Mike and all had nothing but good things to say about the man, as a writer, as a teacher, and as a human being. That’s a damned fine eulogy right there.

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Sunday Night Movie: 1973s Westworld

The Criterion Channel this month added a number of films as part of their spotlight on 70s science fiction. There is a pretty good representation of the pre-Star Wars genre in the selection. Worries about the population bomb with Z.P.G., environmentalism with No Blade of Grass, Corporate control before cyberpunk made it trendy with Rollerball and societal collapse with both The Ultimate Warrior and Mad Max. Sunday night I watched Michael Crichton’s Westworld, which of course served as the basis for HBO’s current series.

The set-up is straight forward, the company Delos runs three theme parks, Roman World, Medieval World, and Westworld where guests for the sum of a thousand dollars per day, just north of 5 grand in today’s money, can live out their fantasies amid a park filled with robots that are nearly indistinguishable from human. Being a Michael Crichton SF story, the technology goes wrong and the robots in the last act of the film go violent and begin killing all the guests leaving our hero Richard Benjamin being hunted by a gunslinger robot player by Yul Brynner.

With a brief running time of just 88 minuets you would think there there’s no room for exposition and yet this movie drags with scene after scene of nothing but exposition. There’s an attempt to explain how the park is safe because the guns detect human body temperature and will not fire at a living person but utterly disregards the concept of ricochets. I was surprised just how dull this movie was. I had not watched it since perhaps the 80s and truly this is an exercise in watching someone else play a game. It isn’t until very late in the movie that the threat rears its head and then there is very little but chase and escape.

There are a lot of SF films from the 70s that hold up today, but boy this is not one of them.

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First Movie of 2020: The Ultimate Warrior

I had planned to start my year off with the 1980 Musical Fantasy Xanadu, a flawed film but an emotional favorite, but before I slipped the Blu-ray into the player I surfed the Criterion Channel and discovered a mid 70s SF film I had not only not seen but had never heard of, The Ultimate Warrior.

The Ultimate Warrior from 1975 and set it the far distant future of 2012 is about competing bands of survivalists in a world that had been devastated by viral plagues. The Plague apparently killed off an enormous number of people as New York City is desolate and deserted, and destroyed the several species of plants, ending Ultimate Warrior Postercultivated farming. It is suggested in the movie that some form of economic collapse occurred shortly before the plagues swept across the earth as we are told that 1981 was the last year automobiles were produced and the plagues came later. The film is light on explaining the backstory giving the audience just enough to feel that it is a world with history that has been thought out and not simply bludgeoned with that information.

Baron, played by the unequaled Max Von Sydow, leads the ‘good’ commune/compound of survivors. Their numbers have been dwindling and the scavenged food is beginning to run out. A rival compound led by Carrot, William Smith, survives through force and theft and threatens the survival of Baron’s community. Into this mix comes the mysterious Carson, Yul Brynner. Carlson is a hired warrior and Baron manages to in his services. In Baron’s commune is Cal, it is never explained if Cal is a farmer or a botanist, but either way he had cross bred another of plants to produce food bearing crops that are immune to the plagues. Knowing that the decaying city is no place to reestablish cultivated farming, Baron has hopes of using Carson’s tremendous gifts as a warrior to get Cal, Baron’s Daughter Melinda, and the precious seeds, out of New York to someplace suitable, but Carrot’s murderous goons growing stronger, time is running out.

Directed and written by Robert Clouse, The Ultimate Warrior, capture the mood of mid-70s cinematic science fiction, dark, cynical, and if there are ‘happy endings’ the price if terribly high. This atmosphere dominated 70s cinema and culture until the release of 1977s Star Wars, when light escapist fare displaced the dark dreary movies with adventure of Campbellian heroes.

Produced on a modest budget the film still manages to portray a dying world and a dead culture. Baron is striving to do what is best but is not immune from mistakes with terrible consequences. Carrot and his gang are not characterized at all, but are presented as simply violent, greedy, a force of the world out to destroy and then be destroyed. There is never any reveal for Carson’s extraordinary skills. He is not presented as a product of science or breeding, and it is never even hinted as having a particularly interesting backstory, or any backstory at all. He simply arrives and upsets the delicate balance with his presences.

The Ultimate Warrior was an enjoyable movie and for those who did not live through the decade of malaise it could be instructive to see the tone that so many did experience in nearly every aspect of the culture.

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My Personal Year in Review

Well we’re about to start another arbitrary cycle around our local star and that means it’s time to look back at what we’ve and answer for it. Wait, that didn’t come out right, it’s time for personal reflection and growth. Yeah, that sounds better.

Anyway, I have to say that this year has been a pretty good year for me.

Naturally, the biggest writing news is that Flame Tree Press purchased my novel Vulcan’s Forge with the publication set for March 28th, 2020. This was a joy and a surprise. Vulcan’s Forge, which languished on my former agent’s desk for a year unread, was a book I wrote entirely for myself. It was an experiment to see if I could sustain a cynical tone for an entire novel, and a labor for my love of film and the genre film noir in particular.  Blending it with science fiction and making constant references to movies throughout the book Vulcan’s Forge is in one manner my most personal work.

In other aspects of my writing life I managed a few interesting short stories and one of my previously published works A Canvas Dark and Deep has been selected for reprint in the anthology Twilight Words coming in spring 2020.

My goal for 2020 is to have my next novel, Do We Not Bleed?, written by my birthday in mid-May. A detailed outline is already produced, and I have high hopes for this piece.

2019 was also the year I fully committed to listening to Podcasts. I have a number of fun, informative, and challenging podcasts on regular rotation. One that has been most surprising in just how fully engaged I have become with it is Scriptnotes, a podcast about screenwriting and things interesting to screenwriters.

Clearly with my love of movies screenwriting has always been a fascination with me. John August and Craig Mazin each week discus the business, craft, and art of screenwriting with many of the topics applicable to other forms of writing as well. They are also gamers, puzzle solvers, and entreatingly amusing people.

My day job continues to be good. I am so happy to be part of a vibrant strong union. Too many times before in my life I have been chewed up by petty bosses and it feels great having an organization at my back instead of being stabbed there.

IN gaming my sweetie-wife and I added Lords of Waterdeep to the regular rotation of our board and card game nights and it’s become very popular. In role play gaming I took a massive step into the past and began running a campaign of FGU’s Space Opera a game system I ran quite successfully for many years during the 1980s, PDFs of the rules are available at a quite reasonable price and it’s been fun, challenging, and amusing to engaged with the typo filled rulebook.

Here’s to looking to 2020 with hope, optimism, and confidence.

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Movie Review: Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker

This will be a spoiler free review.

The Rise of Skywalker is the most disappointing Star Wars film since The Phantom Menace. After the movie finished, I stayed to watch the top line credits. Two people working as a team were credited as the writer with four people working as two teams were listed for story. Frankly I am surprised the writing credits were so brief. The film has such a cobbled together feel with so many disparate elements smashed together lacking any unifying whole that it feels of constant rewrites throughout production.

The movie lacks any sense of serious character arc and none that were established the previous two films in the trilogy. Characters speak and act only to further the thinnest of plot contrivances with all sense of stakes and dangers coming from exaggerated escalations that borrow from earlier films in the franchise.

When The Force Awakens repeated the first film’s beats, I thought that had been a fairly smart move. Returning to the beginning seemed to be a way to clean the slate after the disappointing prequels a way to return and let the audience know that this was going to be Star Wars again and not the laminations of Anakin Skywalker Jedi Stalker. The Last Jedi for all its controversy took bold swings and made firm commitments to interesting themes and characters. At the time there were interviews where people associated with the production stated that Rian Johnson had been given a free hand and that there was no grand outline for the trilogy. I doubted them. I doubted that Disney had spent 4 billion dollars and would let the series simply wing it. After seeing The Rise of Skywalker, I doubt no more.

Not only does this film not build upon anything established in The Last Jedi it uses elements from The Force Awakens as mere hand waving tools to attempt to explain away its own plot holes and deficiencies. The film is a series of action sequences strung together with the barest of plot quests. It feels like a video game where after completing an absurd mission the player is treated to a ‘cut scene’ to explain the threadbare story and the more action and fighting ensues as the next mission is launched. Even this comment does a disservice to many video games which have spent considerably more thought and time on their characters and story than The Rise of Skywalker.

J.J. Abrams having destroyed Star Trek has now repeated himself with the Star Wars universe. Let’s hope that maybe Quentin Tarantino has a Star Warsscript in his back pocket it. It will take something that bold to save the series.

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The Good News Post

So, there are several bits of new news to share this chilly December morning.

First off: Because I have a minor surgery scheduled this week and then a week off from my day job for recovery that mean I will not be working any more overtime. The money is nice, and I love chipping in and helping out my team at Kaiser Permanente but it’s really nice to get back to a normal schedule that allows for writing.

Second, pivoting of the subject of writing, our favorite local bookstore Mysterious Galaxy is saved! They have new owners and a new location so the store will not have to shutter depriving San Diego book readers, un-employing its staff, or leaving its various book, gaming, and writing groups homeless. Truly this had made this season festive.

And HBO’s Watchmen reached the season one finale and for once I am not disappointed by a project associate with showrunner Damon Lindelof. Quite the contrary, this series was fantastic. Every element plays perfectly in tune with the themes that grounded this version of the story and all the major points and developments were well established. The characters both as written and as performed simply captivated and for those that are the older versions of ones from the sources material managed to be true to their natures while exploring logical and consistent change from the thirty years that had passed. While Angela Abar (Regina Hill) may have been the protagonist of the story Laurie Blake (Jean Smart) took home favorite character prize from this viewer. Where the original graphic novel Watchmen centered thematically on the Cold War and the ever-present threat of nuclear annihilation with those ideas and terrors informing not just the plot but the look and feel of the story this Watchmen explored the lingering horror, hate, and trauma of racial injustice and bigotry. Starting off with the slaughter and destruction of ‘Black Wall Street’ in Tulsa Oklahoma in 1921 and ending with crisis from Tulsa that threatens the world, Watchmen 2019 explores justice and the thorny issues confusing that concept with its petty cousin vengeance. Best off the season did not end with a plot cliffhanger. While the final shots left a terribly large question unanswered it did not fail to resolve the essential conflict or theme of the series. If there is never a season two the show is still full resolved and satisfying. Thank you, Mr. Lindelof, I do so hate cliffhangers.

 

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Television Review: The Mandalorian

November 12th Disney Plus went live and since I could get that and the streaming service HULU for the same price I pay for HULU I went ahead and signed up giving me access to the Star Wars  inspired series The Mandalorian.

Set during the chaos after the fall of the Galactic Empire in Return of the Jedi, the series follows the adventures of the titular and unnamed Mandalorian bounty hunter. Returning to the original Star Wars  aesthetic of a dirty, grimy and lived in universe the show is not about Jedi and the quarrels of feuding noble house but, at least at first, about the scramble for survival by less legendary characters.

The pilot episode sets up several aspect of the central character’s situation: money is tight, his people are dispossessed, and he suffered a traumatic childhood.  Given a missions that appears to be ‘off book’ by a mysterious employer, played by veteran eclectic filmmaker Werner Herzog, the Mandalorian is soon swept up into what appears to a deep conspiracy that may test his off practiced detachment from he fellow beings.

While short on characterization The Mandalorian  shows promises that we hope the grand arc will live up to.

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HBO’s Watchmen

So with my expectations appropriately low I have begun watching HBO new series Watchmen. In this review I will fullyspoil both the comic and 2009 adaptation of Watchmen.

Why am I setting expectation low for this alternate history super hero series? The answer is one name, Damon Lindelof. Lindelof has been a writer if television and feature for a number of years and his name is attached to some major projects, Star Trek: Into Darkness, Prometheus, World War Z, Cowboys and Aliens, and the recently delayer and/or canceled feature film The Hunt. With the exception of that final entry which I have not viewed, all of these projects not only left me cold but I felt assaulted by intelligence with gaps in logic that no suspension bridge of disbelief could span. Given that history as a writer I expect very little from a Damon Lindelof project.

However I am a fan of Watchmen  both the original comic and the Snyder feature adaptation and I heard enough about this set up and premise of this series to genuinely intrigue me.

Watchmen  is in an alternate time line where costumed heroes began appearing in the streets sometime in the 1940s. For both the comic and the 2009 feature this leads to a radically different 1980s, Nixon is never forced out of office by Watergate, a god-like being Doctor Manhattan transforms science, technology, and world events by being a patriotic ‘superman,’ figure, and the US Constitution is amended to allow unlimited terms for a president. One of the more revered heroes, Ozymandias, convinced only he can save the world from impending nuclear annihilation fakes a catastrophic event to create species wide unity. In the comic he stages an inter-dimensional attack on Earth from giant squids, and in the 2009 feature he frames Dr. Manhattan for the attack. In both cases half of metropolitan New York is killed. The remaining, having failed to stop the attack, commit to keeping the secret giving Ozymandias’ plan a chance of success except for the manically committed Rorschach. In order to maintain their conspiracy Dr. Manhattan murders Rorschach but a by Rorschach journal detailing his investigation into the plot is published and the world continues to teeter on the brink of global nuclear war.

The series Watchmen  take place 30 years later in a parallel 2019 but it is not clear if it has followed the comic’s reality with monstrous being from another dimension having ‘attacked’ the Earth in the 1980s or the 2009’s Dr. Manhattan hoax timeline. Given Manhattan’s known presence on Mars and a rain of tiny squid in episode one I am inclined to believe that Lindelof is extrapolating from the comic’s history.

Episode one opens with a heinous event that tragically is not part of some dark alternate timeline but rather a part shameful American History, The Tulsa Race Massacre, when rioting white slaughter the residents of the Midwest’s ‘Black Wall Street.’  We follow the survival of one young boy as the rioting and murders exterminate the town around him. The story picks up some ninety-odd years later with our lead character Angela Abar. Angela is a police detective but following an earlier terrorists campaign police are masked adopting like super heroes secret identities. The terrorists that waged their war on the police were the Kavalry, a virulent racist organization that idolizes the murdered Rorschach. When the Kavalry resurfaces Angela’s world is turned upside down and she quickly becomes entwined in a new conspiracy with roots stretching back to the 1921 massacre. Simultaneously on a distant English estate Ozymandias lives in retired seclusion pursuing his own unrevealed plots that involve genetic engineering and artificial people.

There is a very strong moral ambiguity to the show. The Kavalry are presented in a no redeeming method but the police, our protagonists employee torture to achieve their means and that is never good.

Watchmen  the series in its first two episodes presents a number of interesting and compelling character but also displays a few typical Hollywoodisms that usually mar action sequences with events that simply defy any understanding of how the physics of the world actually work but so far nothing that has dissuaded me from watching further episodes.  All in all Lindelof’s show is interesting, complex and may still prove that more than The Fonz can jump a shark.

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It! The Terror From Beyond Space

Continuing my run of films best suited for the month of October last night, after a very frustrating day dealing with AT&T technical support, I watched 1958’s It! The Terror From Beyond Space. This movie along with Planet of the Vampires,  in which no vampires appear, is one of the direct predecessors to 1979’s amazing and classic film Alien. Written by Jerome Bixby It! Pits the crew of a spaceship against a deadly and unstoppable monstrous alien that has stowed away aboard their rocket.

The first Mars expedition has ended in disaster with all communication lost after the ship reached Mars. The film opens with a voice over explaining that the second expedition has rescued the narrator, the sole survivor of the doomed first, and is taking him back to Earth to face trial for the murder of he fellow crew in a bid to survive the harsh and unforgiving Martian environment. It’s not long before the alien stow away make itself known and the crew begin their retreat deck by deck from its lethal assaults. This exploration/rescue mission is stocked with cases of grenades, endless 45 semi-automatic pistols, home made gas bombs, and even a bazooka that is fired off in the cramp confines of the bridge but nothing stops or even hampers the creature’s attacks.  Two of the ten cast members are women but even for 1958 this movie is out right sexist with the ladies forced to serve dinner and coffee while providing only the barest of plot of character motivations, and with the younger, of course, thrust into a needless love triangle because that’s why females characters exist in movies.

Despite its cheesiness It! Manages to score what might be a few important moments in cinema history. Between stolen model designs and sequences the climax of the film may very well represent the first cinematic explosive decompression. The basic set up was one of the films that inspired Dan O’Bannon when he started out crafting the script to Alien and that lineage is stark and clear. Without this mostly forgettable film we would have never been introduced to Ellen Ripley.

 

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