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A new short story

Okay I knew a few posts ago I said I was walking away form short stories, but this little diddy came to mind and I just had to write it.

It’s a zombie-apocalypse story and very small. Just over a thousand words. I’m going to had it over to my sweetie-wife tomorrow for her eagle eye in copy-editing. After that I don’t know. I didn’t write it with a market in mind. It was really just an exploration of one idea of atmospheric idea. I may never send it out, but I am happy I wrote it.

I also got use a one of my favorite words in it….moonglade.

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A change in plans

First, I am making a slight modification to my work resolution.

When I am working on outlines and plotting notes, that I only need to do five hundred words per night. I found that 1000 was too many. I could do it, and I have been doing it. However it was causing me to not fully develop my ideas. While I am constructing the plot it is important to take the time for feel out the flavor and nuance of each idea so that I can properly understand where it is taking me.

When I am working in narrative, that will require a 1000 words per work night before I can play.

Another change is that I am walking away from short stories for awhile. The last rejection actually hurt, and normally I have an iron armored hide when it comes to rejections. (Writing ones, emotional ones were always far far worse.) This one burned and it’s put me off short stories for the time being. I will focus entirely on Cawdor and other novels. (Anyway my black mood is perfect for writing Cawdor.)

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Life is stressful

Sorry about the life posting and blogging here of late. There has been a lot going on in my life and it has been sucking up time and energy and emotional fortitude.

Overtime at work is a factor but the largest issues is that my sweetie-wife’s mum is sick and in the hospital again. My sweetie has driven out to be with her mum. We’re hoping for the best but it is stressful and sleep has been lost.

It’s impacted not only my blogging but my writing as well.

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It could have been worse…

So last weekend I was playing around with the Garage Band software that comes with my apple computer.

Now understand that I have absolutely no training or education in the fields of music or musical composition. Anyway Garage Band has loops of music pieces that you can lay down as track. You can mix the tracks and do all sorts of interesting things with them I had laid down a drumbeat and was playing around with other pre-recorded instrumental tracks.

The results were apparently not to my sweetie-wife’s ear. Her comment was that I should leave music to ‘professionals.’

I take it as a consolation that she has never said a similar thing about my prose.

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One of the best books on Writing

first5This is going to be a short little post because I am utterly exhausted and will be climbing into bed in the very near future. It’s been a  busy week at work and I’ve continued to put in the hours on my novel, Cawdor.

What I want to talk about tonight is one of the best books I have read on how to be a better writer. The book is The First Five Pages by Agent Noah Lukeman. Many of the books on writing that I have read deal with broad concept level writing. How to construct plots, beginning middles and ends. That sort of thing and  that is very important. (Two books I would recommend are Writing The Breakout Novel by Donald Maass and Beginnings Middles and Ends by Nancy Kress.)

The First Five Pages should be on yourself with those two books. What Mr. Lukeman does with his book and help you diagnose and fix the detailed problems that get books rejected quickly. He gets down into the weeds of the matter and shows you how to tell a weed from a flower. The chapters are clear and concise, building on each other to lay open the complex task that is writing. At the end of each chapter there are work assignments to help you learn the lessons.

This book is exceptionally well written and deeply insightful. Cawdor is going to be  stronger novel because of it, If you are struggling with taking your writing to the next level, I think this book would help tremendously.

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Odds and Ends

So I worked overtime tonight at my day-job and that sucked up some hours out of my day. That means I didn’t get as much writing done as I would have liked. Oh well, it will look good on my next paycheck,

I currently reading a non-fiction Book, ‘The Evolution Of God”. It;s really interesting and will likely influence aspect of Cawdor as I write it.

Loscon 2009 is coming up and I am started to get jazzed. I’ve had my membership for a year and rooms are now reserved,

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An additional advantage to eReaders

So I have now read a few books on my Ezreader pro and I’ve discovered another advantage to reading on the eReader vs reading a dead tree edition.

I have a better idea of the quality of the writing than from just the dead tree.

It’s all about the ending. When I read 1633 I was shocked when there were no more pages turns left. The book felt incomplete. Too many loose ends left unresolved and so forth.

With other books I could feel that the author was bringing me safely back down to the end of the story. The arc of the narrative flowed and there was no sudden feeling of where the hell is the rest of the book.

I just finished reading Trading In Danger by Elizabeth Moon. (A book I would not have read had it not been for the EzReader Pro. Mysterious Galaxy had it in e-formats but not dead tree.) Even though the author left many threads open for further stories and novels, the story felt complete. Even though I could not see how many page turns I had left, I could feel the resolution of the ending unfolding. This did not happen with 1633.

I’m currently reading, and enjoying very much, Soulless by my friend Gail Carriger.

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The Book That Changed My Life

Recently my friend Gail Carriger had on her website the story of the book that changed her life. I thought I should share my story about the book that did the same thing for me.

Like most writers I have been a reader since I was a child. Unlike most writers as a child I liked non-fiction books much better than fiction books. I have always been a voracious learner and I can distinctly remember thinking I didn’t want to read story books because I wouldn’t learn anything from them.

One day in school we were assigned a book report to fill out. The teacher handed out an outline of what we needed to have in the report and then said we could go to the library and select our own books.

Well, being a science geek even at an early age I got myself a book about the planet Mars. I read the book – enjoyed it very much thank you – and then sat at the kitchen table and started to work on the report,

Title: well, that was easy enough. I copied the title into the outline format given to us.

Main Character: Mars

Plot or Conflict: Hmmm, I was stumped. I was sitting there, scratching my head trying to figure out what to fill that space with when my sister discovered me at work. My sister had been given a large amount of discretion in my schooling. She decided that I was not going to do a book report on a non-fiction book. Nope, that wasn’t going to happen. She grabbed a book from her collection and placed that before me.

I was going to read this book. I was going to write a report on this book. SHE would read and approve my report and then I could submit it to my teacher.

*sigh*

Star Beast As you can see the novel was the Robert Heinlein juvenile, The Star Beast. The cover art you see is the cover art of the copy I read.

So I read the book. I liked it, but at this time I did not know it had changed the course of my destiny forever.

I turned in the report – I have no memory what sort of grade I earned with it, and then I went back to reading my usual selection of science books from the library.

A few weeks later I was walking through the kitchen of our home and I spotted a black bound book on the table. I picked it up and started reading the first page. Then I read the next page and the page after that.

Well, you know how that turned out. I read the whole book, throughly enjoyed myself, and now discovered I had a taste for this Robert A Heinlein fellow, as this second book was Between Planets.

Between PlanetsNow I was lost. I quickly revised my rule about reading. I read non-fiction books and the novel of Robert Heinlein because clearly I could learn a lot from him. The sad thing is I quickly ran out of Heinlein juveniles to read. There weren’t that many of them and I was a fast reader. By the time that happened though I had discovered Isaac Asimov and his robot stories. My rules changed again and now in my little mind it was okay to read non-fiction and science-fiction (see, the science made it all okay).

Well that fell apart within a year or two when I read Beat to Quarters (in the UK it was known as The Happy Return),  the first Horatio Hornblower story.

I gave up. I became a reader of all sorts of things, and more importantly the idea took seed in my brain that I might even write stories. I had never thought of that before, though I have always been cursed with an over-active imagination.

The one event of reading The Star Beast set me down the path of my life. It gave me my life-long love of written fiction and the crazy dream of being a published author.

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More work done

Cawdor is coming along nicely in the worldbuilding sense.

I added another colony to the notes today and I think I am managing to hit the right balance with this colony. Not a cliche and not romanticized either. IN some ways making the Grand Unified Compact is tougher than the wholly new human culture found in the CRC. Where the CRC is a single artificial culture, the GUC is scores of colonies some with very detailed culturally transmission from the founders and some with cultures that have been more open to natural drift. (Naturally they have all drifted. Only the CRC can remained functionally stable since the AI’s have been in control from the very start. The drift there that does occur is slight and nearly unnoticeable.)

After the GUC is crafted together enough to make my characters from it — I have characters from both in the novel — it will be time for detailed work on the military structures, tactics, and principles for warfare with the logistical and strategic limitations I have built into the universe.

I am so excited about this novel. It is becoming so much more than I had originally planned.

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