Monthly Archives: March 2018

I’m Going to Hate the Kessel Run

In 1977 I was sixteen, already a print and media science-fiction fan, when, along with everyone else, my horizons were suddenly exploded outward with the release of Star Wars. That film helped launch the modern blocker buster and spawned a franchise that continues to dominate the box office to the current day. Later this year one of the spin-off movies we’ll get is Solo, the story of a young Han Solo and I expected, in fact I will be shocked if we do not, we’ll be treated to a cinematic rendering of the ‘Kessel Run.’

Back when Star Wars was first released there was no Internet, no home video, and information about the movie’s production could only be glimmered in interviews, publicity materials, and tie-in books. One of the fascinating bits I remember reading was the on stage story of how cast members repeatedly information George Lucas referring to Solos; now famous boasting that parsecs were a measure of distance and not time. In these stories Lucas always responded that he was well aware of that fact.

If you watch the scene I think it is quite clear what is going on. Solo thinks he has a couple of dirt farmer ignorant about space and he’s trying the BS them about how good his ship really is. He does not expect them to know what a parsec is. Obi-Wan’s face during the negation give it all away, he’s not buying that load of crap but he needs this passage and is not calling out Solo on his tall tales. It’s actually a wonderful bit of character as well as advancing the plot forward.

Somewhere fans decided that Solo must be telling a truth not BS and they began construct elaborate fan theories about what the ‘Kessel Run’ was and how Solo flew it in under a dozen parsecs. The delightful character moment has now been transformed into a piece of bad pseudo-science double talk and Obi Wan’s reaction ignored into insignificance.

I am certain that Disney/Lucas Film will make the ‘Kessel Run’ reality closing forever the original interpretation of that class and memorable scene. I plan to see Solo, I may even love the movie, but I will hate the Kessel Run.

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The Frankenstein Chronicles

My sweetie-wife and I have started watching a new Netflix series The Frankenstein Chronicles. Set in London 1827 the show is about a detective, John Marlott, played by Sean Bean we’ll see how long he lives in this show, as he investigates a series of bizarre strange occurrences. Given the title it is no spoiler or surprise that the inciting incident is when working a river smuggling case Marlott discovers a corpse of a small child that is actually composed of several different children. So far the trail has lead him to noted poet William Blake and author Mary Shelly. We are only a couple of episodes into the series but I am already impressed with the level of historical accuracy, a pleasant change from Penny Dreadful. It is always a pleasant turn when I investigate something in a historical piece that I think the authors may have gotten wrong and instead I come away with new knowledge.

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Watch Out for Prologues

One of the common pieces of advices heard around writing group and seminars is don’t writer prologues.

Prologues are short bits of narrative places before the opening scenes of the novel and there is great debate about their utility. In my opinion there are time when a prologue is required if you want the reader to fully understand the nature of your piece. Like SF Author Nancy Kress I think there is an implicit promise made to the reader at the start of any story and if you violate that promise you are likely to have an upset reader. The prologue can help ensure that the tone and expectations of the piece are well established before the meat of the plot has begun to unfold.

Think about the book, and even the television series, A Game of Thrones. Both start with a prologue where we follow a small band of ranger north of the wall encountering the first stirrings of the army of the dead. Except for the execution scene in chapter one we do not see these characters again. They play no major part in the plot and have no deep familial connections to any of the main characters, but this prologue is essential. Without that prologue we would not know that this is a world of magic and zombies. We are well aware of the danger that so many characters will spend so much time dismissing.

Too often this is not how writers try to use a prologue, but rather they often take a short cut into one of two broad uses.

World-Building;

The prologue will try to lay out too much of the history of the world, to give too much context for the viewer or reader and in the end bore them with a history lesson without emotional meaning. This is very tempting and it should be avoided. The real craft of world-building is laying the foundations just before you actually need them. Sprinkle them throughout the work in pieces to fall into place as the narrative unfolds both enlightening the reader and explaining the world but without stopping to lecture. This is is very difficult to do and so many people try to take a short cut and dump this stuff in the most critical place in the book, the beginning.

A Fake Action Opening:

Attempting to follow the advice to always open with action, writers will craft a battle oriented prologue, something composed action, daring, and high stakes, but all too often that is followed by a lack luster first chapter. Many times this will be the inverse of the World-Building prologue because the first chapter will be extensive world-building and the author has hoped that the prologue and its action will carry the reader through the tedious establishment and info-dumps of a poor first chapter.

In both of these case the prologue is a bandage on the more serious issue, either a lack luster opening or less than stellar world-building. The answer is not a prologue but fixing the root cause of the trouble.

There are good causes for prologue but make sure yours is not trying to fix a more fundamental trouble.

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No, Mr. Shapiro, Get Out is not racist

Recently a friend commented that he agreed with the conservative Youtube pundit Ben Shapiro that the film Get Out was racist. I had not heard Shapiro’s arguments and did not voice my disagreement. Now I have listened to Shapiro’s comments and I find them way off the mark and the error springs from mistaking a personal interpretation as authorial intent. Before I get into Shapiro’s comments I want to use a couple of well know films to illustrate what I mean by personal interpretation versus authorial intent.

1986’s Robocop is an amazing film, in many ways an early modern superhero movie, albeit one that gory, violent, and earned its R rating from the MPAA. In a scene where the audience is getting exposition about the character Robocop it is explained that he eats a rudimentary past to support his remaining biological systems. Johnson, one of the executive behind the project that turned a dead cop into a company owned cyborg, dips his finger into the paste, tastes it and pronounces it ‘baby food.’ His boss Jones, advises Johnson to ‘knock himself out.’ When I watched this scene in the theater I though it was clear symbolism that these men manipulating with lives were in fact children playing with th9ings that they did not understand. Later in the film when Robocop is recalibrating his targeting system and uses jars of baby food that his partner Ann Lewis had brought as target again I assumed the symbolism was clear, he would destroy the company that did this to him. Years later with the DVD I learned that the director had meant nothing of the sort. Paul Verhoeven revealed no underlying symbolism to the first scene and in the second the jars of baby food symbolized the children Lewis and Robocop could never have. Since there are no romantic elements in their relationship that intent took me by surprise.

My second example come from 1994’s The Lion King. A wonderful movie of old school cell animation The Lion King is about a lion cub, Simba that must overthrow his Uncle Scar who had usurped the throne. When Scar is assembling his plan and his minions, a pack of hyenas, to plot the murder of the King and his son, he sings a delightful song Be Prepared. In this fantasy world, unlike real life ecology where lions often steal hyena kills, hyenas are scavengers living off the scraps left over by the lions. Scar gets their loyalty by promising that they, the hyenas, will never go hungry again. When he overthrows the ‘natural order’ and makes himself king, he brings in the hyenas and the entire system collapses, plunging the kingdom into ruin and starvation for all until Simba defeats Scar and restores the balance, the circle of life.

Instantly it flashed to me that on interpretation, and this time not one I thought for a moment the producers intended, was that by bringing in the non-producers, the takers, Scar had overtaxed the makers and destroyed the economy. In effect this entire film could be taken as a subtle attack on liberalism and social safety nets. Hardly the sort of political message I would have expected and perhaps the reason the rumors are that the live action version will omit the song Be Prepared.

With those examples in place let’s return Get Out and Shapiro’s interpretation.

In Shapiro’s view the movie is about ‘black people who associate with white people eventually are drawn into white lifestyles and they become stereotypical white people.’

I have no doubt that this is Shapiro’s actual interpretation of the movie’s themes, but that is not the same as authorial intent. Just as with my take on the baby food in Robocop, Shapiro’s take is his own and not own that has been voiced by the film’s writer/director. Shapiro offers no support for this view that Get Out is ‘supremely racist’ than his own interpretation of the movie. An interpretation not supported by any textual analysis of the script or film. In the words of Oz from Buffy the Vampire Slayer ‘a radical reinterpretation of the text.’ I have heard, read, and seen many interviews with Jordan Peele’s, Get Out’s creator and nothing the man has said lends any credence to Shapiro’s view. Just as Verhoeven’s intent is starkly different than my take, Peele’s intended message and theme is very much at odds with Shapiro’s views. I find it interesting that in those four minutes where Shapiro talk about the movie he emphasizes how funny the film is without ever touching on the fact that Get Out is a horror film. Yes, there is humor but the driving tone is one of dread, danger, and doom. It is fascinating that aspect of the movie seemingly has slipped Shapiro’s notice.

At meetings of my writers’ group I often comment that no honest critique can be wrong and for Mr. Shapiro I guess the movie is racist, but this speaks less about Jordan Peele’s and his script than it does about the lens though which Shapiro viewed the material.

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New Television Series Discovery

This has been a rough cold and flu season for me. Last week I contracted another cold, Friday I was feeling poorly, Saturday was pretty bad and I sent friends home early at the end of Board and Card Game Night, and Sunday I barely made it out to the Noir on the Boulevard screening of This Gun For Hire. (A very enjoyable early noir and worth seeing on a big screen.) Today I woke still feeling pretty bad off and stayed home from work.

As I gagged on postnasal drip I watched Youtube videos and took in a new documentary series on Netflix, Hitler’s Circle of Evil. It’s a ten part series that focuses on the men closest top Adolf Hitler and the parts they played in the rise of one of the world’s most murderous regimes.

What makes this series particularly fascinating is the focus on the men who supported Hitler. We have heard endless examinations of Hitler’s life, his decisions making processes, and so on, but for the rest of that ruling clique we generally are only given glimpses of the others and then only in their relationship to the dictator. In this series each man is followed along his history from his origins into the halls of power and their eventual downfall. While they all served and followed Hitler, each retained their own motivations, goals and methods all of which repeatedly brought them into conflict with one another. It is very instructive to study this sort of history. They were all NAZIs, they were all anti-Semitic, but they were all very different in personality, powerbase, and outcomes.

For those who write fiction, particularly if you have ‘evil empires’ as part of your world-building, this series is must watch research. If can help you flesh out a cardboard evil empire into a realistic and terrible construction.

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On Remakes and Reboots

Next month Netflix unveils their SF television series Lost in Space a reboot of the 60’s show of the same title. Again the premise of the show is essentially The Swiss Family Robinson but in space.

In the original series the Robinson family is departing for Alpha Centauri to start humanity’s first interstellar colony. The logistic of the premise is laughable. A single family founding a colony, the genetics are a nightmare. For reasons a hostile foreign power, never identified as to which power or why, attempts the sabotage the mission. The saboteur is trapped aboard the vessel at launch and ends up trapped with the Robinsons when their ship veers wildly off course and they are lost in the unmapped vastness of the cosmos.

Very quickly an ensemble show transformed into a children’s program focused on Will Robinson, the precocious young boy of the series, the ship’s robot, and Dr. Smith, the saboteur but now a character of comic relief and defanged of all serious threat. The show ran three years and produced classic SF ideas such as a rebellion of vegetables. The show was bad.

So if I did not care for the original, does that mean I will be skipped this reboot? No. Here is my core rule for remakes and reboots; they should only remake material that was bad.

If you attempt to remake a good show or movie, particularly if we are talking a classic, you are almost certainly going to do worse. It’s hard enough to make good narrative material, it’s harder to improve on material that has already achieved quality and that should be avoided. However, bad source material, well, you might find a way to make something good out of that.

Given that Netflix’s original series may indeed salvage something worthwhile from the concept. After all, the original, The Swiss Family Robinson, itself was a remake of Robinson Crusoe but with a good god-fearing Christian family as the principal characters. (In the book the family was not named Robinson, but Irwin Allen was never known for subtlety.)

I shall keep my expectations low, but I will give at least the pilot a go.

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Politics and Entertainment

I am seeing again people advise aspiring artists of every stripe that you should refrain from all political topics lest you offend a potential fan and lose that sale.

Okay, I can see the logic of that. After all we all want our art to sell wide and far, not only does that help provide an income but also it means that the art itself is reaching a wide audience, but is that the single most important thing?

First off I think it is impossible to make art, particularly when you talk about anything with a narrative, that does not also profess, intentionally or not, a worldview and all worldviews are inherently political. Perhaps you never make a public statement about marriage equality or other matters interact with homosexuality, but having gay characters appear or not appear makes a statement, what you do with those characters makes a statement, how heroes and villains react to those characters makes a statement, and the totality of those statement is a political statement. This is true of issues like how the military is presented, how government officials are presented, and numerous other factors in world-building. Narratives are political, that cannot avoid it.

When someone complains about a narrative being ‘too political’ it is nearly always a complaint about a political philosophy that the protester disagrees with. I cannot recall a single instance of someone protesting as ‘too political’ a stance that they supported.

Another important factor is that when someone decides to perform some art they have not surrendered their rights, privileges, or duties as a citizen. In democracies we all have a responsibility to the political body, to participate, and that includes making arguments for what we think is right and against what we think is wrong. To do less is the surrender the duties of citizenship for a gain of coin.

Now with all that said you can be smart about your positions or you can be an ass. I tend to dismiss those who think that the height of debate is ‘trolling’ the opposition. Those who use mockery and insults in the place of reasoned arguments get no where with me save being put on the ignore list. There are political writers with whom I almost never agree and yet who I do read often. I am not reading them to score some sort of imaginary counting coup by dismissing their arguments, but rather to read their actual arguments. Sometimes people who disagree with can have very valid points and its better to understand where you might be going wrong than to continue on in smug ignorance.

So I will continue to make political observations, but I will always strive to base them on reasoned arguments and not on snark and mockery.

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Critiquing the Unseen

So The Shape of Water at this year’s Oscars took not only Best Picture but Best Director as well. I saw the film, enjoyed it, but frankly I think Get Out was a stronger film and should have taken statue over The Shape of Water. (But what do I know I still think that L.A. Confidential was robbed when Titanic won that year.)

What has spurred this particular post is watch some of the reaction to The Shape of Water’s win and the similar reaction that has caused me to remember.

Over at the American Conservative, columnist Rod Dreher titles his piece about the movie Triumph of the Freaks. Dreher is one of those conservative who sees the downfall of Western Civilization and a coming dark age due to the recognition of such ‘unnatural’ and or sinful aspects of humanity such as transgender, homosexuality, and other non-traditional sexual mores. In the column Dreher admits that he has not seen the film and based his entire reaction on what he has heard and reading the Wikipedia synopsis. I always find it astounding that people, usually paid content creators, are so willing to elaborate opinions and dissect pieces that they have not personally seen. For Shape it is clear that the romantic story between Elisa, a mute cleaning woman in a secret government facility, and that facility’s latest ‘acquisition’ and amphibian humanoid. (We can’t call him a gill-man without incurring the wrath of Universal.) For Dreher this relationship is pure and simple bestiality. That the Amphibian is a thinking, feeling creature, capable of language and emotion is meaningless, it is not human and therefore the relationship is unnatural and sinful. Apparently even in such a fictional setting only humans are ‘people.’ However if you have seen the movie — and you need to stop reading if you fear spoilers — then you know that his basic facts are wrong. Either the Wikipedia synopsis omits crucial plot twists, albeit one I foresaw quite early in the film but that’s a danger of plotting your own stories, you can see the magician palming the card, or he failed to understand how revelation destroyed his entire argument.

It reminds of another conservative columnist, Michelle Malkin, and her reaction to the film Death of a President.

Released in 2006 Death of a President deals with the fallout produced by a fictional assassination of George W. Bush. The film used actual news footage as part of the flashback to the assassination in an attempt to create a sense of reality. At the time of its release there was quite a stir in the conservative media about the subject matter with perhaps the most strident voice belonging to Michelle Malkin. She referred to the movie as ‘assassination chic’ and felt that the movie revealed the desires for Bush’s murder by people on ‘the left.’ (Side note; I am always suspicious whenever motivation is describe for a third party without any supporting evidence or citation.)

As with Dreher and The Shape of Water it seems clear to me that Ms. Malkin never actually watched the film she criticized. In the movie’s narrative the assassination has taken place years earlier and the country now labors under the heavy authoritarian hand of President Dick Cheney. There is mass round-up of ethnic minorities and other police-state tactics, hardly the sort of dream world envisioned by ‘the left.’ The film itself is rather pedantic, predicable, and ultimately boring. I know this because, unlike Malkin, I actually watched it on DVD. It hardly revels in the murder of a conservative president, but acknowledging that would destroy her entire thesis about ‘the left.’

I believe that it is vitally important that people actually watch the media that they critique. You cannot rely upon synopsis, second hand accounts, or skimming to arrive at a fair judgment. It is also equally important to set aside personal bias and pre-conceived notions, otherwise all you will end up with if a big fat case of conformational bias.

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Cold War Marathon

This past Saturday I have several friends over for a three-movie marathon with the central theme being The Cold War. For some of the people attending the films were their first views, while others had seen at least some of the trilogy. With pizza to snack on we had a very enjoyable time.

We started off with The Manchurian Candidate, the story of poor doomed Raymond Shaw and of vast, complex international communist conspiracies to subvert the American democracy. For anyone who only knows Angela Landsbury as a sweet old lady solving mysteries, or as a welcoming animated teapot, this film is a revelation and a shock.

Following the paranoia of The Manchurian Candidate we skipped across the pond for the British film, The Spy Who Came in From the Cold. Spy follows the exploits of Alex Leamus, former station head of for the East German sector of British Intelligence. When Mundt, the head of East German intelligence, kills Leamus’ last agent, Leamus’ superior, code named Control, leaves Leamus in the field for one last operation in hopes if destroying Mundt. What follows is a cat and mouse game with secrets, betrayals, and the cynical premise that one cannot afford to be less ruthless than your enemy, no matter your ideals.

To counter the dreary themes of the previous two movies we ended with the black comedy Dr. Strangelove or How I stopped Worrying and Learned to Love the Bomb. In Strangelove, General Jack D. Ripper, suffering a paranoid breakdown, orders his B52 bomber wing to attack the Soviet Union with its nuclear payload. Suddenly the Russian and Americans find them selves scrambling to find some way to avoid atomic war and the destruction of all life in the Earth’s surface. With farcical overdrawn characters this movie highlights the inherent absurdity and dangers of the Cold War’s nuclear standoff.

Overall I think the marathon was a success and that people enjoyed this bleak black-and-white peek at the bit of history that is not too far behind us.

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And the Draft is Done

Well, technically I completed the first draft of my latest novel a week ago, but only now am I talking about it here.

This is the next novel in my military/sf adventure series. My agent is shopping the first book in the series and I went ahead and produced the second. The title and synopsis is of course under wraps but it deals with an American officer serving in the 3rd European Union’s interstellar forces. I refer to the setting of these stories as Nationalized Space as this is an imagined future where mankind spreads out into the cosmos without ever having unified. In addition it is a future where sometime in the early 21st century the United States took a wrong turn, never recovered, and ended up a minor power. After all, all empires fade.

Now that the draft is done, currently at 99,000 words, I am going to take a few weeks off from working on the novel. First I am going to play on my new Xbox One S and lose a lot of matches of Player’s Unknown Battlegrounds. Second I am going to work on some short pieces, including trying my hand at a pulp styled adventure, but in short story form, and then after I have achieved some distance I will return to the novel for the revision processes.

I’m confident that the book has no major flaws that will require a complete rewrite, but I have been wrong on that before. I anticipate that the revision will be principally tightening, clarifying, and of course hunting and killing the dreaded spelling and grammar flaws.

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